How can i start a paragraph?

Kate asked:

I have to write one paragraph about a candy island. How could i start the first sentence? also whats a good metaphor and or simile i could use?

THANKS!!

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1 comment to How can i start a paragraph?

Summer

August 14th, 2010 at 2:31 am

I would start it ‘A sweet succulent aroma pervaded the air around the island as the sun beat down upon it. The sunbeams glittered like a thousand tiny bees busy buzzing around their hive.’

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